Wednesday, May 16, 2007

when u left me.....

My life was an ecstasy when I met you

Until the day you tore my heart into two

There are times in my life when I miss you lots

You told me special things from the start

You promised to never break my heart

Oh how I believed you

But within seconds, all were shattered

And now even though I am hurting deep inside

Day and night I am thinking of you

Thinking of your smile

Your laughter,

your eyes

Your love, so true

I used to go where we used to meet

I hear your voice

As I walked by

But I dared not to look back

But it fasten the heartbeat

And I can’t control myself and I look back

But you won’t be there

I just wished.....

For a glance of you

To see that love....

In your eyes again

For you to take

Away my loneliness

And today when I am standing at this place

Like a shooting star I caught a glimpse of you

Nothing else I could see

But, you turned your back

And I logged for you to return

To see me standing there

Yet, you kept going

Leaving me in sorrow

I felt like crying

But there was nothing I could do

You left me for nothing

With a silent tear

All I could say was

Sorry I loved you…

6 comments:

~ange|~ said...

touchy poem... bt dun be sorry u loved him.. be happy u got the chance to love :D tc

zaavy said...

its a very old one of mine, wrote it looog time bk, its kinda long dhoa, aslu ninman neygifa ...hah

manippulhu said...

angle// thi khiyaalaa haam dhekolhu! dhen hama thimaa aaa dheytherey nuvisnaa meeheh dheke loabi vevun aee fahuru veri vaan v kameh tha!!!!

zaavy said...

eki meehun ge hiyaalakee thafaathu ehekeve ;)

Eve said...

these is wonderful....i can feel ur pain

Anonymous said...

my feelings became ur w0rds loved it